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Breeze Blows

The breeze blows away

the best of names

yours may also

but mine is for sure
of that there is no panacea
nor cure

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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This hollow headed guy had to read this 4 times before I got the full meaning lol. But yes very few names are remembered over the course of time.

had to revise it ten times
till his nut
was cracked
and
all brains sapped
before garbage
was wrapped

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You will join all those names..
Have you any news on Joe, Germania ??
I cant even find his works here and he must be honoured by us ..

Words can build a nation

I very much miss him
He always praised my works
(as did Esker)
and was aware I was a neo
will you miss me

when I go also

I KNOW ANSWER IS SILENTLY NO
WE ALL COME TO GO

author comment

I asked about Joe do you know what happened to him I last spoke to his carer..
It is hard I have lost so many during the last two years but that is my fault for growing old..
Stop fishing you of course will be missed should you leave, I was asking of others.
Take care as we walk the same pathways here,
Yours as always young Bard, Ian ..

Words can build a nation

even Stan doesn't know

glad u will miss me
IF I GO
AS AND when

WHEN U WILL
I WON'T KNOW

ur younger IAN

author comment

I have found Joe's works so am doing the same as I did for Esker and putting them on A few Blogs for others to enjoy,
Yours Ian ..

Words can build a nation

I MAY CONTRIBUTE when I review
All d best
he deserves it too

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