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Book your flight

Heaven is now full
Apply for good seats
too many Earthian
Corona cases
all wanting a
Rebirth
in unknown but
beautifuller
heaven
not many gardens
catered for
newer ones

you may have to be born to fish
in rivers and oceans
lakes possibly

Come enjoy rebirth
All human
destroying a living paradise
just fill an application
Heaven's Rulers will decide

Waiting time
no guarantee
maybe a million years from now

just wait please
coolly

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hello, Lovedly,
I enjoyed your poem, and like your title very much. I have a question, though - can heaven ever be too full? From the feel of despair I get here, it doesn't seem that many of us are heading that way.
You always give a lot to think about.
Thank you!
L

just imagine
we are humans born
over 50000000000_____=+++++years ago
that many more also died
where have they to go to hide
heavens beside
only a thought
no one in heaven will ever be caught
we leave our bodies to decompose or
burn in the nights of darkness

author comment

In the last epidemic more than 50 million people lost their lives,
If nothing else
there was a long queue up there...

Lovedly are you writing a book of covid poems? I see you have many now?

Love the title

Wasn't it mark twain who said
I prefer heaven for the climate but hell for the company? Maybe we really do get. Choice which queue would be shorter?

Thank you...Teddy

Yeah I have composed so many
not posted all here.

Do you think it will be worth a penny
after spending Dollars in publishing it.

Please be frank kindly .I will need a publisher who would do it for free
Can you help me
15 Teddy
be steady

author comment

I can't help publish them, but I've been to most and given advice on how they could be improved if indeed I saw it, yes I do think it's worth making a book of covid poems especially as none of us have lived through a period of pandemic before, not like this anyway. Sure there maybe someone very old past 100 who may be able to say something. But in today's world we can express our thoughts and use our ability to share easily with the world thanks to Internet and here at neo! The most important thing is to make each one count so they have to be written well and with much sence because we won't be here to show them ourselves and explain what they are about. In the far far future .

Thank you...Teddy

I will ask my PA
to try and find a
publer

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