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The Bluffster!

The Bluffster
Ruse! Now Fuse!

You caught us all with our
Bikinis down
You got your hits and kicks
And
Perhaps a few cents too

Some guy bluffed
He got 700 bucks
What bucks he didn't say.

Only newspaper and Don Articles
Get that many flies
Bees,
And
They all suck some honey
On ones finger tips
Like do fleas.

If you continue to bluff
And call out a ruse
Friend perhaps
You yourself will fuse.
Take care
Be aware
We all know how
They all earn money
And
Where it does go
You also
Damn well know!

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author comment

The theme on this one is OK now to appease the Gods of poetic perfection this will need an edit to it's construction.
One of your older ones has come back to haunt you, Yours, Ian

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I now don't post here
as so many have had hay stacked
i spend more fruitful time elsewhere
conducting competitions
and they r kids who learn faster
than on any neopoets
as this one is being too much
constrained
and i shall say no further
by who?
u all know and
knew

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