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BLUE BLAU POETREE

I read a few conversations
now I also feel
like being in BLUE
at times I say
BLAU

Shall compose
a BLUE POEM
when I'M NOT ....

heavens are not blue today
darkened clouds
so you may have to wait

when the sun is out
I'm naughty
to be in BLUE DEEP SEA
wearing almost nothing
other than BLUE
LOL ...HA HAHA

I shall await
the last laugh
will anyone help me to

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

There is always something in your work that catches me, in this case, the German word for blue - blau.
I hope tomorrow brings blue-blau skies your way!
L

You knew
I'M BLAU
Daily blue
hence everyday poemy flew
into blue
tnk uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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how you manage it, but you can get naked at the drop of a hat, or blanket or towel, pants... whatever! Now we have to deal with a naked, blau German lovedly? Please! Love it, ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

BLUE OR BLAU clothes we had none tnks GEE you may need to close ur eyes lol

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