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Blessings for Canada

Bless Canada where
I dwelt in self ordained confinement
and
woke up each morn,
to the sun,
trying to peek in
through the venetian blinds.

I felt like playing mischief,
closed my eyes,
till the sun was up
in the heavens,
only for a brief moment,

Suddenly,
snow captured the sight of Canadians,
I rested still wanting to bask,
in the winter sun alas,

But the Almighty my desire did kill.
It helped me through
two years and a half,
to compose over 3500 poems,
the score seeds
beyond poetic destiny,
now over seven thousand
Crack my head...

My critiques in disbelief,
as most consider me
an orphan of poetry ,
age not withstanding,
as none know me
the millions of sunrises
I had since seen
eons passed

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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soon you will have a book of a 100 poems. I'm sure of it.

cheers,
Jess
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the book shall be released by you
and
less costs
I shall share the booty,
if any,
with you.

But you alone have to specify and edit
those 100
you say would do.

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Should you consider so

the book shall be released by you

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friend Esker ...
on CANADA

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