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blazened lost eternally

Soon we all shall be lost
in the ocean of time
only few will run about
in search of poets who rhyme
In this world poetry is taking a revolution
come bask in the sun of reveller
show
don't tell any one
what you want to convey
let them in their own visions
your dreams match and obey
Only day dreamers ever win
others dream
in the darkest corners of mind
where will such poets ever
a name in the world find
Go with the winds
of salutations and rewind
you will never ever again
of another kind find

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Free verse
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Just to let you know I am still reading poems, also I do write sometimes so that you just don't have to read your own alone..
The way we become lost is in not communicating with each others, the end of no communication is that you are standing alone in a wilderness, where only the wind will whisper as it passes over the dry sand but who will hear its passing.
Yours, Ian in waiting..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

and
those who still love us
if not us
our poetry
Happy I am
many still do
now here I post only minuscule
take two!

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you and Ian are not alone, I am here with you.

*hugs, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
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we stand up right
cat
you must know it
Ian must also mean it

author comment

It is good to see you both again
reacting to words scrawled from my pen.
It is a lonely world where I watch from
Torn by common sense from the throng.

You both are the heart of our place
Yet others are afraid to join in the race
If only they could see that in reality
This is a place for us to escape, with sanity

Probability tracts stretch out for future days
They are all joined here as we start new ways
You both are as one, left in a narrow band behind
In life's dance, with you its a pleasure to bind.

Yours as always, Sparrow, Yenti, and even Ian.T
Love you all..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

we are in the hearth
which you call furnace

burnt ashes
cinder still
Ian you know it

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Would still like you both to read and comment on "The Keeper " just for me, xx

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

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