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Black Blob Primal Poetry

in the twilight of the night
before the day light comes
a black blob
a white light
a lion's head was formed...

a black blob appeared before my eyes
a white blob came from the dark side
and the face of a lion formed from the light
three times is what i saw...

tiny blue blobs
appeared at the bottom
in the corners
the image...

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a part of the primal workshop, be sure to add it to your title and in the drop down. I like the images; I think this is what we are looking for! Never mind about the reader's interpretation, this is something that might only be seen by the writer; and it is for you to explain, to us if you like, but mostly for yourself. I like it! ~ Geezer.
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it is only for me...i lot lots of unexplained thing thinks ...the tool of jess is helping me paint a scripted picture...kids think im crazy when i tell what im seeing.. as for knowing what it means i do know what it means..as it pertains to me personally...explaining it not so much

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that it has helped you. It is always helpful to know yourself, in order to present something for another to read and understand too. So, keep on experimenting and learning about yourself. I have learned much about myself and the way that other people see me; through writing here at Neo. Everything that I have decided to share with the people here, has gotten some kind of feedback. Even the ones that got no comment or critique, tell me something. The scene I painted, the story I wrote, just didn't interest anyone else the way it did me or I didn't present it well enough. That's ok, I can write it better next time! ~ Geezer.
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that one of the purposes Shamanic trances are sometimes undertaken is to find ones spirit animals. Three times especially indicates this might be the case. What a magnificent animal has chosen you, and entirely apt, your strength and courage are apparent to all who know you. Congratulations!

Lion is also one of mine, along with crocodile and kookaburra. A very strange thing, when I first met it I thought it might be a lioness, no mane, but over the years it grew in size and grew a mane! It grew with me!

Turn to lion when you need support with strength and courage, even ferocity if needed. I am delighted this has worked so well for you.
You know I love you,

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

i saw the lion back in 2017during the august month after the total solar eclipse...when i was doing whatever was helping me guiding myself....i didn't know it was my totem but i knew it had something to do with me spiritually on my awakening...i've seen more animal totem such as a black and yellow butterfly in my psyche suddenly from no where and many other things that continue to this day in my ascension....this tool is very helpful ...

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