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Black Beauty

As you lie in black darkness
it overcomes the darker clouds

as you awaken
souls of human
and
arouse

darkness is the blackest beauty
black horses
gallop about

your mirror is a reflection
of an inner concealed darkness
that does liveliness arouse

there is no darkness
in your cloud
as you are all about

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Hi Lovedly;
about your poem? bite me, but I love it! It's different. I have no crits to offer. Jerry

All my poems
each one is different.
All my life
I lived in a fool's paradise .

I listened to everyone
Now I am coming out
of that darkness into light
at least I will end up in delight

Leave others to solve their own plight
Yes now though late I surely might

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