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BITTER SWEET

The sweet ones
who comment sweetly
are hardly any
as the world proceeds on
such beautiful ones are also gone

The hardness prevails
as all know
one day those
unwanted ones
will also go
yeah
they damn well know

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

We have to believe that that someday will come. ~ Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

but of course as I always say
life is controlled by
GENES
ENVIRONMENT
AND
CIRCUMSTANCE
ALL IS A MATTER OF TIME
Thanks friend you r kind

author comment

I wish the bad ones would get bored and leave a little bit sooner. I perceive that you feel strongly about this! I do too ;)

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

yes
as Simon says in auditions
we need a third yes
hello Gee
yes yes yes

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