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The bitter bug

The bitter
bug begged
to bite her
but the girl
was a little
fighter.
So in spite
she took to
light him.
Then the
bashful bug
fled in fright.
Fleeing into
the mists
of the ashy
autumn night .

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Now that is a poem. It is whimsical, stylish and wholly entertaining. Thank you for making my morning start off in a positive way

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

and your welcome

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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tongue twister! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

one my favorite types of poetry is tongue twisters because it fits with my alliteration.
and i was inspired by cole porters song the tale of the oyster
like i used the rhythm of it .
https://youtu.be/Acx_LN8X2_k

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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