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Beyond the stars

we still see
hoping to find the God
who blesses and relieves

but where to find
such a universal being
overseeing all human
Now its 7.5 billions

can he count em?

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He created all of them, so of course He can count them. Impossible, you think? He is God, duh. lol.
As to where to find him, I was told He is everywhere. Again, not possible? That is if you limit your view of Him. He is not like any of us, so He is beyond our capacity.
Let me share with you the muslim's view on this - You cannot see Him but you can see the revelation of His words in His creations. The Qur'an is not a book which only tells the story of the prophets and their people, but it also describes some aspects of geography, science and many other subjects. oh dear, don't get me wrong. I'm not here to preach, just to share my views.

Alid

can you imagine
anything born w/o the sun

nothing

so god is manifest in SUN only
that only time can tell
but when i discourse with normal
intelligent humans
I don't discuss religion

' tis ones faith and belief
let them in themselves find relief

who am i to over shadow the heavens
and imagine a sky without a sun

then there will be
NO
HUMANS ...ANIMALS AND PLANTS
NONE

EARTH WILL BE BARREN

no one will think of GLOBAL WARMING
THERE WON'T BE THE NEED
none...

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