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BEYOND RAINBOWS

Submitted by Geremia on Sun, 2016-01-31 13:40

BEYOND RAINBOWS

I dreamed a dream in sepia
and faded black and white.
there were no rainbows in my life
nor would there ever be....
how could I see otherwise:
stormy clouds of deadly grey
behind horizons blue,
sudden falls into the abyss,
the fear of life's turns and twists,
the curse of suddenness
a world of paradox
a world hidden by lies

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Editing - rough draft

Comments

Fri, 2016-05-06 02:32

mand's picture

Hi Geremia

Soo very heart wrenching - but so very well written.

Loads of love to you xxxxx

Keep those poems coming!

Mand xxx

Fri, 2016-05-06 08:25

Geremia's picture

than k you, M and

than k you, M and

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Fri, 2016-05-06 23:29

lovedly's picture

ur suddeness Joe

is like ''certainess'' too
we all are happy to read u

Shakespeare has permitted me
to create newer words as did he

He sent an SMS to me
invisible only my mind can read

Sat, 2016-05-07 07:41

Geremia's picture

thank you. I hope u r well.

thank you. I hope u r well.

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Sat, 2016-05-07 08:48

lovedly's picture

yes Joe thank you

daily a tooth is being washed by medicinal glue
one month long on treatment
they say will do
so I will daily read you
did you read
EPITOMES

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