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Beyond Eternity

Each day when I get up early
I wonder am I now standing
at the end or far edge of eternity
as I am graduating into eighty
will let you all know
whether all who knew
recognized me
so remain standing by
I may still on the mommy Earth sigh
bit longer while
so continue to bless me
with your shining teeth
as you laugh or smile

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Free verse
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remembered Lovedly for your good heart.
I always thought that our life is counted by the deeds not years.
Enjoyed the sense of peace in this piece


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Follow me

I am happy at least

you will recall

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