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Beyond Eternity

Each day when I get up early
I wonder am I now standing
at the end or far edge of eternity
as I am graduating into eighty
will let you all know
whether all who knew
recognized me
so remain standing by
I may still on the mommy Earth sigh
bit longer while
so continue to bless me
with your shining teeth
as you laugh or smile

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Free verse
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remembered Lovedly for your good heart.
I always thought that our life is counted by the deeds not years.
Enjoyed the sense of peace in this piece

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