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Best Speaks

The better have spoken
about the best
see how we catch up
reading others
so many now follow
my style of free
and
still freer verse

as now comments they also post
in poetic verse

if we all did not have our individuality
no Shakespeare would ever
have been born
and
as Ian calls me a bard
though a smaller one …
but still I am

thanks to your poem
the lost imagination
let go of all past and evil
go slow there is more potion on earth
as not so much in heaven
when we are totally physically
mentally
and
spiritually simply none
all forgotten ones
but then where is heaven

who knows!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

love it.

Alid

for loving it

loved

author comment

I liked it but try and go for a better flow in the last stanza, I am sure you will be able to do it...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

yesterday... I nearly lost my site
What would be the way,
to find ones way ,
if it did so happen.
Perhaps some intrusion...

loved

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