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To be beside the sea
mind and body in harmony
listening to the sea’s symphony
a water creature is me
feels like heaven ought to be

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Structured: Western
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felt it would benefit from removing the word "is"
a water creature, me

thanks a mil will remove cheers Sueb x

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