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Being Unique

You are not boring, you are not weird, queer is word, discovered by the ones who fear us different birds. We are different… but not only are we not the same, we are all unique, our own selves that are loved in different ways. In this world, no one is the same, there are the groups, categorizing individuals, it’s a hierarchy of what's the most suitable. I don’t fit in that hierarchy, neither might you, but that’s what makes us unique, we're pretty mystique. We're different, you're nothing like another I have seen before, you glamour my heart like the sunshine I'll forever remember, you are magic. Not the fantasy, but the reality, you're real, you're bright, brighter than the highest achievers, brighter than any holy believers… you're important.

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A warm welcome to Neopoet.
I see this not an actively editing piece, so all i can say is that I would make the lines a bit shorter. I thought maybe you meant this to be prose rather than a poem.
Thank you for sharing anyway.

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A great welcome to Neopoet I hope your stay with us will be a great one and that you will learn of us and Poetry..

I have played with your words for a few moments just to show you that the layout can be important:-

You are not boring, you are not weird,
queer is word, discovered by the ones who fear.
We are different birds. We are simply different.
We are all unique, our own selves
that are loved in different ways.

In this world, no one is the same,
there are the groups, categorising individuals,
It is a hierarchy of what's the most suitable.
I do not fit in that hierarchy, neither might you,
That is what makes us unique,

we are pretty mystique. we are different,
you are nothing like another I have seen before,
you glamourize my heart like the sunshine.

I will forever remember, you are magic.
Not the fantasy, but the reality, you're real,
you are bright, brighter than the highest achievers,
Brighter than any holy believers… you are important.

Yours as always Ian T (Sparrow)

Words can build a nation

Hello, Samuel,
When I read this aloud, it feels like the rhythm of rap. That's the way it speaks to me. What a wonderful affirmation to not only your intended subject, but whomever reads!
Thank you!
Lavender

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