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Beautiful is the Night

Beautiful is the night
‘'if angels would come and take away the night’’
Your version Madam ~~~2016

‘‘No more angels these days
all have gone far away
we have now explored
too much of wilderness

Haven’t found angels
passed the skies milky way
so from hopes of angels
do stay away

the light shall still come
your path so stay

we all say have a good day
till the galaxy shows us our way
the night is still young today

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Hi lovedly, what an interesting poem. I like the questions about angels. I believe "angels" come now and then to show us the way, but in the form of real people.
Not sure what you mean by Madam, etc. and 2016. I've obviously missed something important.
Enjoyed, best wishes, Gracy

"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

Far Away and Long Ago
as you also know

some poetess
who used to read me regularly
composed poems alongside me

She was a MADAM
AND 2016
was just the year of her poem

Angels yes are now real humans
only it is a matter of human understanding
many take stories literally
hope now they will understand
once they read your comments
ah ma'am

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Of angels showing rarity of existance
And the faith required to see the unseen

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nice to c u Ray back b happpeee


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