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A Beautiful Flower

Thoughts
Cascading through
A timeless piece
One can learn to understand it's fullest creation
First a seed then the soil
An ever increasing pull through the ground
Sound the alarm
Vanquished from the worms that eat
With time a sprout then the light of illumination
A pulse of radiance sought after colors of deep penetrating taste
An explosion of excellence
Red, yellow and white
The sun beats upon the fullness of it's brevity
Solace has replaced the film in front of the natural eye
The vast nature's beckoning call asunder
We awake to take in it's priceless beauty
A challenge to be set free is a question of time

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yes..i agree too..very enjoyable....
thank U chevyvent
mr W

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