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Be That As It May

When the autumn winds
Cause the last leaf to fall
From my ever weeping willow
Tomorrow I'll be here ...

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Thank you to Alan S Jeeves for this wonderful Title
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Not Explicit Content

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I hope that you enjoyed the fun of using the alt title as an ultimate line.
I had some good fun with you in the workshop and hope that you were truly tickled with tantalising titles.

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Critique is a compliment
Kind regards, Alan
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I hope you like it, your play on word confusion, if you know nothing about me yet, I am nothing but a bit dizzy! So I loved this challenge very much. I too thank you for everything you do to make this site what is is, fabulous.
But between me and you maybe this would better be called a co/write! lol

I think it's quite British, this one, which makes me proud

Thank you...Teddy

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A beautiful write to an inspiring title. I know that you're using the last line as suggested by sir Alan but thought it would read better if you drop (tomorrow).
Try and see.
Enjoyed this little gem.

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I see what you mean but to honour the challenge I will not change it but just to give you more insight, although I know you are well read. I actually used the tomorrow as to bring the poem full circle

Come what may,
What ever happens
I will be here always

It's all metaphor

But thank you!

I do love when you come to visit and of course if I recreate this one I will consider your opinion.

Thank you...Teddy

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