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Be encourage

Stay positive in times like these
this to shall pass
life changes
managed times
rewind.

A lifestyle.

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Comments

Good short poem about difficult times. You just need too insted of to.
Also "stay positive in these times". IMO, one has to avoid "that" as much as possible. To take or toss.

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I am a fan of short pieces of poetry especially when they deliver a placid message straight forward.
Thanks for sharing and looking forward for more of your words.

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