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This hilltop is just fine
No more mountains I must climb
Aspirations have peaked
There's nothing more that I seek
The feeling is quite sublime


The simple song of a
sweet water brook
is symphonic enough for me

A field of hay
asway in the breeze
can tease me giddy all day.

Evening porch,
a rocking chair, of course,
watching the sun go down.

A little light reading,
and the sleepys bloom easy,
as wind chimes woocoo the moon

This hilltop is fine,
and with nothing but time
I just might join... a poetry site!

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hilltops and LZ's
climbed a few knolls
loved this
love fluid dynamic studies
quantum work going on
cant add one plus two

makes me want to get back
up on my local hill for the view
been a years since I put in
the effort!

thank U!

thanks for responding to this piece...


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