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Barrier Warrior:

Walls for protection
Security division
Free in detention

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Walls keep persons out as well as keep persons in. When does a fortress transform into a prison?
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are always screws.

('screws' Aussie slang for prison guards, same there?)

cheers,
Jess
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good observation, but unfortunately, those inmates with money will enjoy their stay more than those without courtesy of those guarding the gates- I guess that is the same everywhere also.

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