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Barrier Warrior:

Walls for protection
Security division
Free in detention

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Walls keep persons out as well as keep persons in. When does a fortress transform into a prison?
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are always screws.

('screws' Aussie slang for prison guards, same there?)

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

good observation, but unfortunately, those inmates with money will enjoy their stay more than those without courtesy of those guarding the gates- I guess that is the same everywhere also.

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