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Barrier Warrior:
Walls for protection
Security division
Free in detention
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Walls keep persons out as well as keep persons in. When does a fortress transform into a prison?
Editing stage:
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weirdelf
Sat, 2018-04-21 19:01
But screws
are always screws.
('screws' Aussie slang for prison guards, same there?)
cheers,
Jess
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OriginalRhyku
Sat, 2018-04-21 21:34
Weirdelf
good observation, but unfortunately, those inmates with money will enjoy their stay more than those without courtesy of those guarding the gates- I guess that is the same everywhere also.
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