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Barding!
Barding!
The poems,
three of them,
Were as an inspiration
by Seren,
She asked me to
pack up my old templates
And write a new,
So the
River Of No Return,
became due.
Then Shirley said
Rainbows,
which you have to
Comment perhaps too
Later,
a third one was written
Their Different Ways,
Inspired by the American
And
Canadian
Hence three poems
But ,
I found from a book of
Nobel’s,
They wrote in simple language
Which the Prize evaluators
Could understand,
So soon I shall fall back in line
With Loved of older land.
Yes,
Lou also gave a competitive clue,
Of that I can’t yet tell you,
But it’s for you to give me
A title anew
Will some one from you
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
loved
Thu, 2010-12-09 12:16
thanks
The bard within me
arouses a mixed feeling
of old
and of
gold
today its all so sold
I'm told
hence
BARDING
TWILL BE
AS SAY YEE.
loved
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-01-02 14:58
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cheers,
Jess
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