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Barding!

Barding!
The poems,
three of them,
Were as an inspiration
by Seren,
She asked me to
pack up my old templates
And write a new,
So the

River Of No Return,
became due.

Then Shirley said
Rainbows,
which you have to
Comment perhaps too

Later,
a third one was written

Their Different Ways,

Inspired by the American
And
Canadian

Hence three poems

But ,
I found from a book of
Nobel’s,
They wrote in simple language
Which the Prize evaluators
Could understand,
So soon I shall fall back in line
With Loved of older land.

Yes,
Lou also gave a competitive clue,
Of that I can’t yet tell you,
But it’s for you to give me
A title anew
Will some one from you

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

The bard within me

arouses a mixed feeling

of old

and of
gold
today its all so sold
I'm told

hence

BARDING
TWILL BE
AS SAY YEE.

loved

author comment

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cheers,
Jess
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