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For Barbara's Eternal Renga WS Bring in the Spring
Sheer excitement
at awakening of spring
on rosy petals
chorus of peepers at eve
and purple finches at dawn
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Barbara Writes
Mon, 2016-03-21 14:42
Wow
You wonderfully quick. I'm still putting it together. I got my first poem
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raj
Mon, 2016-03-21 14:44
Thanks for the Wow Barbara,
Thanks for the Wow Barbara,
Hope you liked it for a beginning to the eternal Renga,
Am I in?
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2016-03-21 14:51
I love it of course you're in
You get to start it off
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alidzain
Tue, 2016-03-22 19:18
here's mine
The days grow longer
in the season of rebirth,
younglings come to life
Spreading warmth marks winter's end
as bears rise from their slumber.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Tue, 2016-03-22 22:15
Thanks alid
I appreciate you springing in. I'm still preparing but glad you're in
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lovedly
Tue, 2016-03-22 21:01
wow u do rember raj
I know nothing about renga
at yours I wonder
Barbara Writes
Tue, 2016-03-22 22:17
Hey lovedly
Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2016-03-22 22:17
Hey lovedly
Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru
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lovedly
Tue, 2016-03-22 23:58
yeps haiku
I do once in a BLEW MOON
oK blue
what else can i do
Barbara Writes
Wed, 2016-03-23 07:58
Haiku
Ok write a haiku about spring then add to couplets at bottom of it and you have tanka poem for the renga. .
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2016-03-23 08:01
Hi raj
Change this in edit to "bring in the spring" workshop. It's presently in collaborative poetry writing workshop
Thanks.
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