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For Barbara's Eternal Renga WS Bring in the Spring

Sheer excitement
at awakening of spring
on rosy petals

chorus of peepers at eve
and purple finches at dawn

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You wonderfully quick. I'm still putting it together. I got my first poem

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Thanks for the Wow Barbara,

Hope you liked it for a beginning to the eternal Renga,

Am I in?

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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You get to start it off

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The days grow longer
in the season of rebirth,
younglings come to life

Spreading warmth marks winter's end
as bears rise from their slumber.

Alid

I appreciate you springing in. I'm still preparing but glad you're in

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I know nothing about renga
at yours I wonder

Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru

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Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru

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I do once in a BLEW MOON

oK blue
what else can i do

Ok write a haiku about spring then add to couplets at bottom of it and you have tanka poem for the renga. .

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Change this in edit to "bring in the spring" workshop. It's presently in collaborative poetry writing workshop
Thanks.

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