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the b small P BIG

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2016-01-19 19:01

All artists are lovers first...
they kiss....
never miss

Pierce
then tear the canvas
gals in tears

he fixes her soul
solely
on silk only
nothing to unveil all is shown
revealing the camouflaged
hole and sole
the whole
where he loved it most

then only will others peel
and
the love of the ardent artist feel
ask the gal of Titanic
how she felt it
once only!
ere the sinking of the ship
became an everlasting memory

so be it...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Esker

Mon, 2016-10-10 10:27

Esker's picture

I met the jackies
prowler rows
ladies who
kick ass
(better then some man B****'s)
slang intended

worlds not just dominated by
sucessful alpha males
Whom chose but the best
brightest tricks of the apple tree

I knew women who were like
pilots....they were like female
aces...hearts painted on the
skin of their loveship
they ruled the skies
sweeping high
swooping low

how would I know
Oh I get smitten
like loves bitten
immortal bite

the tang of
that taste
no more fight!!

excellent poem
Lovedly!

Kate was awesome
in that movie!

Mr Wolf!

lovedly

Mon, 2016-10-10 18:00

lovedly's picture

poetic excellency
is all urs

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