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Away From You!

My coffee?
I got it as cold
As the early morning breeze.

How I never realized
That your breath adds
The warmth to every
life detail!

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A perfect piece to remind me you can never fully appreciate the presence and love of another unless your inner formulation includes their potential absence Nice write Rula

really appreciate your comment and value it highly zebra.

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Love this piece.

Khalid

Khalid... Nice to receive a comment from you bro.

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Says a lot in such few words Rula...very meaningful about mere presence of someone else adds value to the experience...if I read it right it underscores the value of togetherness...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

not sure how I missed your comment here.
Thank you.
miss your presence. Hope all is well.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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