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Awakening

I never realized he was
till he was
but only when he wasn't

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Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Taste my new concept of briefery words like haiku 5 3 5
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Still trying to digest this one. ~ Geezer.
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sum total

''one realises the value of some one
once that ''some one'' is absent
or no more
my newer briefer version
of conveyance
in fewer words

author comment

This is abs IMAGERY
Do try and read my poem on a girls passing by
she said meet you on the other side

''NO OTHER SIDE''

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