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Awaiting to be married

Happy landing
off the spring board of spring
may be in Autumn or Winter
may marriage happiness
to you bring

see all is in money
had you any
you
wouldn't have waited
for spring
Autumn or Winter snow
and
now hope all well with you does go...

see all is about money....
only money teaches...
richness and poverty ....
ask all those who live

Below The Poverty Line

I note with a heavy
though happier heart
some do get a lovelier hearth
,money apart

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Must not be All about the money because even this man of little means manage to find a wonderful woman to marry lol. You might give some thought to deleting the last line then read this and see if that line is missed.........stan

the concept of
.....'''even this man of little means ...'''
I don't accept ...as your concept of '''little '''varies with mine

but the intended deletion
I shall refine
done it go
do see!

loved

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I note with a heavy
though happier heart
some do get a lovelier hearth
,money apart

loved

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