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Autumn woes

Fiery red leaves
fallen from trees
onto the cold damp ground

Awaiting their final journey
as I tip my head down
to peek at nature's beauty

I can't help but think
what a waste.

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Nice, straight to the point...I like that.

Why thank you. It's nice to see you. Have a great Saturday and indeed Halloween.

Thank you...Teddy

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I love your interpretation.

Happy Halloween in the USA.

Thank you...Teddy

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The beauty of the reds and yellows, and oranges of fall leaves, nature’s art destined to rot and create the springy carpet we walk on in the deep woods.

Also, I hope it's one that the reader finds his own interpretation, i like yours. so yes in a few words I got a lot. Thank you Sir, it's always a pleasure to see you.

Thank you...Teddy

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