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AUTUMN OF OUR LIVES

Dear Lovedley
And we have locked him outside
till such time a vaccine he does not provide
he must also know
man has since grown
in this very life
where is he still waiting
in the darkened corners of the night
solving only rich man's plight
and common humans like me, are not yet in sight
no light no garlanding
O what is he a NON SPIRITUALIST
we must all desist
and let him ride above the clouds side by side
where still our god your god the worlds god the future god
of humanity still showers rain snow and green leaves is the autumn of life
tell me
AH, you all will silent beings products of nothingness
nature knows ye well
we all must culture manure for our dried up shallow brains
he is autumn who comes again and again
rain OR
no rain

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And we have locked him outside
till such time a vaccine he does not provide
he must also know
man has since grown
in this very life
where is he still waiting in the darkened corners of the night solving only rich man's plight
and common humans like ME are not yet in sight
no light no garlanding

O what is he a NON SPIRITUALIST
we must all desist and let him ride above the clouds side by side

where still our god your god the worlds god the future god of humanity still showers rain snow and green leaves is the autumn of life

tell me
AH you all will silent beings products of nothingness
nature knows ye well
we all must culture manure for our dried up shallow brains

he is autumn who comes again and again
rain OR
no rain

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Free verse
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And we have locked him outside
till such time a vaccine he does not provide
he must also know
man has since grown
in this very life
where is he still waiting
in the darkened corners of the night
solving only rich man's plight
and common humans like me, are not yet in sight
no light no garlanding
O what is he a NON SPIRITUALIST
we must all desist
and let him ride above the clouds side by side
where still our god your god the worlds god the future god
of humanity still showers rain snow and green leaves is the autumn of life
tell me

AH, you all will silent beings products of nothingness
nature knows ye well
we all must culture manure for our dried up shallow brains
he is autumn who comes again and again
rain OR
no rain.---------is the last word supposed to be rain?

I have just tidied it up for you. Its quite gracious!

Thank you...Teddy

GEE PLUS 15
TNX FOR THE POLISHING

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sometimes, i write my work on my phone so it looks ok, but then i see it on the computer and it's so different, im pleased to help you anytime. X

Thank you...Teddy

I only try to myself show
folks who read me
say I glow
I ask them then to
me follow

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you mean for the Autumn to stand for the Fall of humanity? ~ Geez.
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