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Autumn Has Come

Autumn plans reversed out of reach
away from the heat of sandy beach
my desire travels to a cold and hard city
snow in great Canada, oh what a pity!

Imagine cuddling is fun so cosy
blushing beneath covers feeling rosy
wishing a third would pop up soon
with a face like a silvery blue moon

perhaps we could park in Banana city
we'd be alone mindless of nitty gritty
recalling kids desired another sibling
a lovely one, wow you are now dribbling

a girl should by next October be due
how memorable it will be, there's no clue
we once enjoyed such a one can't forget
our first Sunny, we were happy to beget

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

You know the difference between rhyme and free-verse! I like your little ditty about making babies. ~ Geez.
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this is old verse deary Gee
nothing free

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You can rhyme when you choose to lol. I liked the contrast between summer and late autumn

as also on poetricks
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