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Autumn Flower

There she lay in the wild
baring her virgin charm
squirming in the passionate breeze
seducing the flirting aphids
with her scent and vibrant form
to mate and sate her nascent desire
and in the aftermath
feel blessed and overwhelmed
with a moist drop at dawn
sparkling her maidenhood.

There she lay
dreaming of offspring
warming her womb.

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There is a great use of imagery, and personification in this.
I have nothing to suggest but much appreciation!
Always great to read you!

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for your good words.

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Wonder why should it be an (autumn) flower.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Autumn Flower because "conceived in Autumn and progeny in Off[Spring]"
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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For the clarification dear raj... I see now the playing with the words too. Very clever as I said.
BTW... This piece deserves more audience to appreciate.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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but he doesn't like my words
play
what I mean by
lay
so
I now stay away

It's a choice ...those who find time to read and respond I appreciate...those who don't find it worth it I have no regrets...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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