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Autumn Dreams 'with audio'

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1CDwQMLJs6QM1pvc1p1Uk5Ha1k/edit?usp=doc...

In Autumn dreams
Whistling wind chords sing
And leaves whirl wildly
Falling from tall oaks

Yellow, red, orange blade-like petals
Travels in the cool breeze
As I peer from my chair
On folded arm my chin rested

As winter played this wintry day
Snow flurries cover fallen leaves
Swooping down from treetops
Bluebirds footprints in the snow

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Autumn beautifully painted with words, Love Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Roscoe, thanks for reading and sharing. I've recorded it and it's ready to share, but I still seeking a way to find a way to get the audio file from my google drive or iPhone voice memo.

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"Audio on Neopoet" carefully. You can record the poem directly onto Vocaroo. You can also get apps on your device that allow you to record mp3's, which you could then transfer to Vocaroo.

nice poem.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
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"Audio on Neopoet" carefully. You can record the poem directly onto Vocaroo. You can also get apps on your device that allow you to record mp3's, which you could then transfer to Vocaroo.

nice poem.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

Vocoroo won't allow me to do so at the moment on my iPad or iPhone. I've done so with Google Drive. . You can listen to it now.

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Very nicely captured. Excited to listen to the audio dear Barbra.

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Rula, thanks for reading and sharing. I working hard with Beau to get the recording from my iPad in Google drive and iPhone voice memo.

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I never give up
I figured out how to submit audio from google drive. Easy, I guess it's the computer geek in me. lol

"Autumn Dream"
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1CDwQMLJs6QRzdpT0lYVklqWEU/edit?usp=doc...

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Thanks for sharing dear. I always thought that audio makes a difference.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thanks for listening and sharing.

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I loved it. So calm and soothing and read with just the right amount of import. You're a natural!

Thanks Barbara!

Ron

Blue Demon77

"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."

The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath

thanks for reading and sharing. Im glad your enjoyed the audio. I deleted several audios until i felt right as I often stumble in words. Just like grammar and error I must revised to get it near clarity. lol

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I like the poem, though refrained from critiquing it before I heard it and now I love it and understand all your work a great deal more.

No wonder you have problems with traditional meter! It is not your language. I intend to go back and re-read some of your works with your voice in mind and I urge you to post your poems with an audio link more often.

This is so gorgeous, true and lovely!
(You know how seldom I get effusive, I am truly moved)

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

Thanks for reading and sharing. It bring my heart joy to hear you say that. I wondered why meter was so hard. I write what I hear and to know it not traditional meter was a bit stressing.
My nature, in general, is different from any status quo as I tend to struggle with understanding.
As for having a different poetic language all my own may not be such a bad thing if people can enjoy it

Being told I'm natural makes me feel better knowing my strangeness can make a difference for good.

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