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Aural Lotion

sweet nothings
after-glowing
glide
tenderly
mingling
love's sheen
like liquid starlight
dripping
fragrant
kisses
lingering
mid-air
fading
slowly
reluctantly
into sleepy
invisible
silence

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

Love it. Simple. Flows very well. Language is strong.

Thanks,

Scott

you've touched on all the facets I was concerned with.

thanks

Al

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and it gives me a smile.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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thank you so much

I appreciate your response...It gives me a smile

Al

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