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Assault Lines:
Aghast by the past
Bombast and blast simulcast
Last forecast downcast
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
If past is not past, then present marred with no future.
Editing stage:
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OriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-04-17 09:16
mark
Thanks for your comment. the madness seems to be increasing all over the planet with the Rohinjyas in Myanmar and missile strikes in Pakistan, bombings in Afghanistan on a macro level and barbaric violence against innocent girls in several places in India. People need to channel their rage, their angst, their fears, their hopes through the sublime arts like Poetry and Neopoet is a premier place for poets.
author commentOriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-04-17 10:05
Picasso
- his comments are very well balanced and centred unlike his paintings that can be appreciated by those possessing artistic sensibilities - I am not among those fortunate ones.
author commentGeezer
Mon, 2018-04-16 16:45
Just another day...
of watching the news, with a feeling of doom in my heart. ~Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
OriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-04-17 09:18
Doom and gloom
but hope for a glimmer of bloom and boom
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