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The Artist

breathless
light of illumination
with blank canvas
he begins to create
a myraids of fixed visions
angelic fervor of exploration
a brush stroke with colors
red, yellow & green
at the top of the canvas
a yellow stream
vast radiant emotions expressed
mark the time he is willing to create
lines being formed in groups
a beacon of light to a hurting world in need of love
again with a brush stroke
the canvas explodes with energy
beautiful interludes within
color permeates visually gathered
out of deep humiliation
rests then looks upon his masterpiece
Adoration jubilation throughout his vast domain

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Comments

For all the unwelcome honesty you have received, Mario, honesty is addictive.

cheers,
Jess
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