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Artfull Beggars:

Why do we
beg most of us

read my poetry
spread my message
share my works along with yours
and
buy my book and so and so on

'coz begging is in our blood

a guy tells his gal
lie with me
we will forever lie as in lay
that's begging

why should she lie or lay with a guy like thee
Beggary
or
many poets love gal's poetry
only as if she was begging
come feel me all
is this not begging
or
a hubby
tells his wife lovely
come straight away to me
else I am going out with Lily
is this also not begging
or
a wife tells her hubby
why are you silly
come eat me
is that not begging

If it is not
then tell me what is

Only for alms
at bus stops...railway platforms...airports
is begging
what blasphemy

don't follow such ones
all are beggars
you may also include me
for begging to follow
what I am teaching

beggars are all
we...
You and me
OK

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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thank you Jerryk

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consider it begging, only husbandly duties! ~ Geezer.
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Creative poem, highly original. My only crit is that it could be pruned a lot and you could also put more lines together. For my liking, that is. Take or toss. Enjoyed and laughed.

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Ma'am
I always like your nice advice

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