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ARRGGHH! She's gonna have to go !!
A POX !! -- A POX !!!
upon the man
that flogged my wife
this camper van,
and told her "please don't
worry dear
that damp patch here
is nothing queer,
it's merely steam
and condensate
that's dripping on your
empty pate"...
Obi.
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Geezer
Wed, 2021-12-15 12:50
In spite of...
all the lines about making assumptions; I'm going to do just that. I am assuming that your wife bought a campervan, and she got cheated. I will also assume that the empty plate you write about, is the empty pockets that resulted from the buying. At any rate, the story is interesting enough to keep one reading and speculating. ~ Geez.
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Obadiah Grey
Wed, 2021-12-15 13:00
The Wife,,,, (Buggered off
The Wife,,,, (Buggered off years ago)
The "Empty Pate",,, (Her vacuous head)
The Empty pockets,,, (Mine)
Hiya, Geeez!!
Obi.
author commentGeezer
Wed, 2021-12-15 13:07
I misread...
the pate as plate. LoL
~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?
Triskelion
Wed, 2021-12-15 13:10
Nicely done
Pate is a new one on me. Enjoyed this one!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Triskelion
Sun, 2021-12-19 17:43
Apologies..
..but I have to throw this out there. I wonder what this would read like if you changed two words ie...flogged to shagged and "on" your empty pate to "from" your empty pate.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Obadiah Grey
Mon, 2021-12-20 10:39
You've met the ex wife then!
You've met the ex wife then!
Obi.
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