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APOCALYPSE OF ONE

APOCALYPSE OF ONE

how soon it comes
this apocalypse of one.
how helpless when
nothing can be done,
and so it is with all
creatures human:
the soul grieves as
the flesh agonizes
and the spirit languishes
in hopeless longing

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Comments

I haven't commented on the last couple of poems, because I just don't know what to say.
That they are well written is beyond dispute, but they are so full of anguish, I just don't know where to start, I read them, I hear you, I know you are suffering beyond imagination, but I don't know how to help.
My thoughts and heart are with you Joe. Jxx

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