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ANOTHER LEASE OF LIFE
A short while ago
doc said so
Now you go eat the diet I laid for you
relax all will be well for you
gave me a thinking of a lease
at least more nine lives
then the cell rang loudly
doc here
I withdraw fully
You haven't fed me well
So I will have to rethink
the terms of lease
wait for some time
walk
no tension
okay my young son
son
perhaps you are like my son
I pop to thee
Finalize the lease hopefully
I wanted to drink
funny doc he
guys help me
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Question is how much on docs must we rely
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
mddy
Fri, 2021-01-22 18:43
Dear Lovedly,
Thought provoking piece! I find myself wanting to reread!
-{Madeline With Love ♥}
lovedly
Fri, 2021-01-22 22:39
you mddy
young poetess
are most welcome to do so
Any views suggestions would be welcome