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A short while ago
doc said so

Now you go eat the diet I laid for you
relax all will be well for you
gave me a thinking of a lease
at least more nine lives

then the cell rang loudly
doc here
I withdraw fully

You haven't fed me well
So I will have to rethink
the terms of lease

wait for some time
no tension
okay my young son


perhaps you are like my son
I pop to thee

Finalize the lease hopefully
I wanted to drink

funny doc he
guys help me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Question is how much on docs must we rely
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Thought provoking piece! I find myself wanting to reread!

-{Madeline With Love ♥}

young poetess
are most welcome to do so

Any views suggestions would be welcome

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