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Another Autumn Blown Away by Cold

You make us all nostalgic
autumns come and go
like magic
regularly

I recall those days of my beauty
when to meet you in autumn
was our profound duty

in the parks guessing
which one now

leaves have shed
all have your poetry read
now see all distant parks
dogs still bark
(hark)

dear Londoner
where thou art
my one time mentor
don't fall apart

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
ONLY AUTUMNS GIVE HOPE IN LIFE THEY ONLY COME BY IN DIFFERENT STYLE
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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from this poem, I understand you are missing someone, who was very close to you. I get the feeling that this person is beyond our mundane world of today. I am so sorry.

*love & hugs, Cat

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but also we lost a friend we knew for 70 years this last month
so it matches it may be
thanks Cats

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Sparrow?

*hugs, Cat

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Shall get back if I recall Cats thanks

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he was a very good friend to me and he helped make me a better poet and person. I miss him terribly and love him.

*hugs, Cat

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he always kicked me like a football
before he died said lovedly I liked football finally
he made a poet out of me

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