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“Let it go. Let it out.
Let it all unravel.
Let it free and it can be
A path on which to travel.”
Michael Leunig.

Annarcheyes adores Leunig,
The world’s best visual poet
But he can’t see
The pain that she
needs to cause,
her sacrificial suckling pig

Annarcheyes enacts a plan
For thethe grisly demise of a man
Whose crimes , like Fortunato’s,
Need not be named
Yet the vengeance and pain
Need to be fully explained

Annarcheyes rufies the beast
He awakes in the dark
Naked and bound
And hears the hoarse whispered sounds
Of his fate,
The noted Killer will miss this feast.

“There won’t be much pain,
I want you alive,
On a drip, local anaesthetic
First you starve
Then I feed you your feet
Your pursuit of prey won’t be so fleet

“Then your hands go down your throat
You won’t be so quick to gloat
Over grabbing
(did I mention the mirror overhead?
Your eyes will be last)
An appropriate repast

“Force feed in no particular order
Your ears, tongue, balls and dick
(with Maxolon!
Thou shalt not be sick)
None have any significance
In your general gender disorder.

“Then the eyes, the pain now real
Dumped at a hospital
You’ll be kept alive
As utterly helpless in fact
As you made me feel”

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
There is a Chinese saying "When you seek revenge, first dig two graves". But sometimes imagination is enough.
Editing stage: 

Comments

your fuckin weird ...no wonder I like you ;)

For thethe grisly demise of a man...are you being esoteric or do you need to fix this?
Pls provide some context for me
she provides pain to her suckling pig ...so lucky for him if ,,,,it is a him or if its a potato?
Maxolon ...looking forward to the side effects ...eeek I'm retarted,,,I finally got its a get back poem
BEWARE NOT A CAREFUL READER!
Did you know retarted is no longer available on spell check. Its been vanquished from language ...didn't pass the PC test even though I resemble one
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