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And so it rains....

Submitted by alidzain on Sat, 2016-02-13 13:12

Dark clouds gather,
thunder's greeting
shook the ground.

Wild is the wind,
howling like a banshee,
dispersing fallen leaves.

The song of frogs
growing louder in anticipation
to end the nature's thirst.

Within moments,
heaven's blessings attained
and so it rains..

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Rula

Sun, 2016-02-14 07:51

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This is beautiful.
I feel a bit envious :)

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alidzain

Sun, 2016-02-14 11:19

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Thanks for the visit, the read and the encouraging comment.

Alid

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scribbler

Sun, 2016-02-14 14:57

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This reminds me that spring thunderstorms are approaching before long. You have a very descriptive poem but it's also brief which is something I seldom achieve lol.........stan

alidzain

Sun, 2016-02-14 15:03

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I'm not good at writing lengthy poems. Think short is better but that depends on the form and the mood while I'm writing it.

Alid

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scribbler

Sun, 2016-02-14 23:18

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Nothing wrong with brief. Not all poems should run on and on like a lot of mine do lol......stan

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