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And this is Poetry Neoly

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2021-09-27 18:09

Only simple ones
love simply
to smile and enjoy beautiful flowers
O where is my garden
I wish to see
ere from this worldly museum
I flee
will you still then love me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Tue, 2021-09-28 08:14

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We will miss you when you're gone! ~Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

lovedly

Tue, 2021-09-28 13:31

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I'm happy u let me know all ye WE shall remember me lol i will REMEMBER

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