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and this is life

and this is life

Marriages are made in heaven
make them a success on mom earth

beautifully pt across marriage is
only come promise to me

else, compromise will ye
all marriages can be made happy
if you don't do anything
that would make another feel sorry
why did he or she marry
and worst of all you!

THREE THINGS FOR OLD AGE HAPPINESS HE SAID IT
I ONLY SHARE IT

FIRSTLY
HAVE SOME THING TO DAY
MY ADD ON KEEP BRAIN ACTIVE

SECONDLY
HAVE SOME ONE TO LOVE
MY ADD ON HAVE SEX ALSO LOVE WILL FOLLOW
ALSO LOVE KIDS, GCS NEIGHBOURS TOO
HAPPY WILL BE YOU

THIRDLY
HE DID REITERATE
HAVE SOME THING TO LOOK FORWARD TO

MY ADD ON WHAT ELSE DO YOU THINK I DO
LOOKING UP TOWARDS HEAVEN FOR A NOBEL
THAT’S WHY I COMPOSE A DOZEN POEMS
SOME SILLY GUY WILL LIKE THEM

THANK YOU SO YOU ALSO FOLLOW ME TOO!!!

and this is life

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Huh! That line didn't make sense.
Now, otherwise I thought the poem cute.

W. H. Snow

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put across described kind elaborated
snowman

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see edit kindly snow man

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