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Am I Awake
Am I awake or asleep I cannot tell
Am I trapped in Heaven or roaming free in Hell?
Am I who I am, or am I someone else?
I look in the mirror, and I do not know myself
I took a long trip, and I went far, far away
It lasted all night it passed in a single day
I fell down a rabbit hole; I fell so deep
I almost drowned in tears I did weep
When I returned, I was in an awful state
Could not tell if I was asleep or if was I awake
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-02-04 10:23
Getting stuck
It’s difficult to understand if you’ve never been in really deep hole. Everything sort of feels really far away and you’re consumed by your thoughts. Good on you for seeing the forest for the trees so to speak.
Tim
Depressed 1
Sat, 2023-02-04 20:26
Thanks
Thanks Tim
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RoseBlack
Sat, 2023-02-04 10:53
Everything
Tim just said. An honest, emotive write. Well done!
~RoseBlack~
Depressed 1
Sat, 2023-02-04 20:27
Thanks
Thanks RoseBlack
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