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Always On The Go
Always on the go
Pursuing happiness
chasing bliss
following a rainbow
trailing an afterglow
reliving old memories
tracing past glees
stalking mystery
Escaping sadness
shunning madness
hiding from tears
evading fears
fighting the years
avoiding the shadow
sneaking to and fro
always on the go
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2012-12-15 12:43
I seem to remember liking one of our poems,
but this cheerily sentimental crap has no poetic value.
cheers,
Jess
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sueb
Sat, 2012-12-15 12:50
sorry jess thanks again for
sorry jess thanks again for reading and commenting
weirdelf
Sat, 2012-12-15 13:02
Actally tonight I am inon of my bad moods.
I'm sure your poem had meaning and uplifting for someone.
aorry to be dick.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
sueb
Sat, 2012-12-15 13:17
Hi Jess I'm sorry your in bad
Hi Jess I'm sorry your in bad form and I'm also sorry that as long as I enjoy writing I'm going to keep doing it I don't take offence easily and everyone's entited to an opinion hope your mood and weekend improves I'm out for a well-deserved pint with the girls it's been to long all the best x