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Always On The Go

Always on the go
Pursuing happiness
chasing bliss
following a rainbow
trailing an afterglow
reliving old memories
tracing past glees
stalking mystery

Escaping sadness
shunning madness
hiding from tears
evading fears
fighting the years
avoiding the shadow
sneaking to and fro
always on the go

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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but this cheerily sentimental crap has no poetic value.

cheers,
Jess
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sorry jess thanks again for reading and commenting

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I'm sure your poem had meaning and uplifting for someone.

aorry to be dick.

cheers,
Jess
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Hi Jess I'm sorry your in bad form and I'm also sorry that as long as I enjoy writing I'm going to keep doing it I don't take offence easily and everyone's entited to an opinion hope your mood and weekend improves I'm out for a well-deserved pint with the girls it's been to long all the best x

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