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alls relative space

just in space..
you are the master of yourself
learning…
I the master still yearning....

after the age of seventy
one is on the footsteps of senility
and someone at seventeen on the heights of juvenility
but all is relative…

pardon me some poetry is extinct,
yet it doesn't stink

a few current ones smell foul
some bad mouth
many spoil
yet the rife mind soils
the visions of those who appreciate
and don't think random

and so friend
Ian and Loved
are two such examples,
one in the clouds
the other in the woods

which one is where
find out if you could
all is relative
he, me and you

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Thank you for your mention, this piece was doing fine, now come in out of the wilderness we need your verses here.
Take care Young Bard,
Yours as always Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Dear Ian.................

loved

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