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Alley Echoes (my kind of love poem)

I met this chick
she was hot
we hit it off pretty good
right from the start

we fucked a lot
she made me laugh
I made her giggle
she kissed good too

then she did something I didn't like
or was it me doing something
she didn't like
can't quite remember
but that's how it ended

It made me sad

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
this is a sensitive recollection please don't be too robust with your laughter ,or pity
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conquistadors like us....agenda agents
Im a spy In the House of Love sang
Morrison..and his Pammy followed him
into the beyond!!!!

my real muses wanted happiness
the essence of creative touch oozing
my married surviving muse says..
"My husband doesnt know the color of
my eyes!!" and yet he was the best
provider....is...they are still married!
many came alongside me tendering
for trade....Happiness is a moment
traded..........when Your older the
trinkets and breadcrumbs add up
and are remembered more then the
stable fulfilling meal....Artists..

an odd lot....

still in touch with all my muses...
they craved the attention then
I was their waypoint and they mine...
nothing wrong with this!!!

I was a picky bugger....many offered
and I chose so few!!

gambling one oh one!

but I did gamble..I got memories
I think they know.....their signature
moments on our hearts are not
crossed out...that the few there
will be rare..

as are we!

Life is short...thats all I know
at my new existance of fifty four!!

the few In...taught me as much as I
know as I taught them!
thats how it works!!

I neither pity...nor frown
but smile at this recollection
as they do when I meet
them again on the trail
and get a robust hug!

Thank U! Al

Mr Wolf!

A mixture of truth and parody
hiding something from myself
me, my own mystery

love has seedy, even creepy elements to it
we pretend a lot of crap about it.
ROMANTICISM! is fundamentally a lie

so what! who cares?

It makes up the best pages in our scrapbooked memories.

thanks for the feedback,

Al

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