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THE ALL TOO HUMAN

Submitted by Geremia on Sun, 2016-08-14 15:07

THE ALL TOO HUMAN

There is an inexplicable and mysterious essence
within us that makes us rise above ourselves
in our darkest moments of despair as our life
draws near to finality: a scintilla of promise
washes over us to disclaim doubt and fear.
there is much yet to learn of the ways
of God and Nature yet our heart and mind
are stricken with disbelief and we lose count
of the treasures of Creation

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Comments

lovedly

Sun, 2016-08-14 15:13

Joe you are now

the greatest poet of a
Darker Era

but the brightest
as of now
as you singularly
traverse
the path of loneliness
composing
DARKENED
melodies
how so ever
dark may they be
but poetry is what is
this....

lovedly

Sun, 2016-08-14 16:34

i know you don't read but read this Loved they say is a Monkey

Comparing'' Loved to a Monkey.......''
Let him be my master
Esker
I only guys humour...
MONKEY he knows
are intelligent
and
the two of you take time
to discuss such a
FOOL!

Never mind Loved's too cool
passed age of some of you
may be most!

Standing at the edge
of the cliff of time
like Joe,
sooner than later
LOVED
too will not chime
there may be no more
rhyme
lime
and
sublime
as he lays
in hands of Divine!!!!
with Loved all is fine...